You have a slight error in your descriptions. You should change "Second page" to "Next page" or something along that line. Second page refers specifically to page number two. Thought you would like to know.
may be it shouldn't.. i just wanna to say, celestia and luna are the most mysterious ponies ever. I think that the only thing we should know about them it's their relationship) If nobody will ever know about their past, that will garanty nobody will be disapointed. Like John Tolkien said "in every story must be at least one unsolved mystery"
I have read your thoughs about Celestia and Luna, realy interesting. but i still think that Celestia's and Luna's story will be nice in cartoons for teens, where everything must be logical. But this is a story for kids, and it must be just nice and cute.
They are so adorable that my heart won't be able to hold out much longer. Too many heart attacks due to cuteness. (Lol, I'm just joking around though. Im not actually gonna stop reading them, they're so awesome)