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Diana Barry by Nayshi-Erol
Diana Barry
a 20 minutes doodle of Diana, who is a character in one of my favorite movies. 
I didn't have a reference or a model so I'm not sure she's recognizable but whatevs. 
Tumblr link - mary-yanko.tumblr.com/post/103…
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The Road Lies Through the Duck by Nayshi-Erol
The Road Lies Through the Duck
The journey for me starts with traditional materials like oil and pastels, but I still can't choose between computer graphic and canvas. Though I'm always jumping from side to side it makes for an interesting pattern. 

 Anyways, the "artistic journey" contest was a focus of my interest all the time since I found out about it. It would have been a crime not to participate, besides the idea is so engaging. 
Good luck to every contestant, I wish all of your deviants were chosen for the video as there are so many good pieces already! 
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Ann by Nayshi-Erol
Ann
Oh I haven't uploaded here for a while, have I? This was supposed to stay in my folder unseen forever but I have to upload something. 
Yes, I cut it on the knees. Because I can.
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Kikimora by J-Grey
First of all you've done a great job and you managed to keep an awesome atmosphere that keeps engaging the viewer.
But I think I know why you don't like this picture.
- composition. See how the character is right in the center of the picture? That's making the composition boring. What you should do is add a little more space in the bottom(cuz she walks that direction) and a little less space on the top. Look at the left and the right sides. They are the same size and both have very similar trees in the corners. You may add more space on the right side. You've done a great job adding a crane and a pond thus breaking the symmetry, but it needs to be even more different.
I think you don't need such a strong perspective on the trees, because this makes her look giant, and I'm not sure if that's the idea.

- colors. there's nothing much wrong with colors because you did a nice job with the pallet, I just wish there would be more reflective lights on the objects. Don't make shadows using black or gray - it makes the picture messy and boring. try adding greenish-gray and yellow and see how it looks. Experiment more.

- organic shapes. crane and the girl look pretty realistic. I can see that she has a skin texture and the bird has a lot of feathers, but I can't say the same thing about grass and trees. This shows that you have little practice with botanic elements. make trees grow in different directions, study them from photos and nature. make grass sorter and add more different colors of it, see how it looks on photos. Same goes for water and all other stuff.

- anatomy. Good job here. I can tell that you draw a lot and know what you're doing. I can advise you to be less stiff and allow more movement for your models. Good thing would be to look at animation sketches because studios like Disney draw realistic people and still give them nice fluent motion. Also try constructively drawing everything that stays under the dress - I can see that you had troubles with torso.
-face. You're right it looks 30+ years old. I personally have no problems with that, but if you want her younger try not using sharp edges and lines, make it lighter and the shadows more fluent. Be careful with drawing nasolabial fold - that's the older peoples trait. Try adding more colors and shades to hair, challenge yourself not to use black on hair next time but still make it realistic.

I hope this helps. I think this peace will be great if you add a few alterations, the idea is still strong and you definitely know what you're doing. Good luck!

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hjordang Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Congratulations on being a semifinalist of the Contest Artistic Journey Challenge!!!!Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap 
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Nayshi-Erol Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2014  Student Digital Artist
thank you :'O
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LliaOlsen Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Your work is so awesome.
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Nayshi-Erol Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Thank you!
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PonyNerior Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2014  New member
У вас просто обалденные поняхи)
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AdorkablePeanut314 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for the llama! :D
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thedutchbrony Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
thank you SO mutch for the llama :O
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Nayshi-Erol Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Student Digital Artist
don't mention it
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youngartt Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Your art is amazing!
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Nayshi-Erol Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Student Digital Artist
thank you!
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